эпиграмма

[avva]

Придумалась эпиграмма по-английски. Посвящается не скажу кому.

Before you trust this man, remember this:
Although he aims to please, he'll always miss.

Comments

[angerona.livejournal.com]

Very cute (although i can't shake the feeling I've seen the last line (or the variation on it) somewhere -- but, perhaps, all great things are obvious in retrospect :) )

the last line spotted

[tom-ohawk.livejournal.com]

Happy lover kisses miss
Unhappy lover misses kiss

- maybe you've seen the similar line in this proverb?

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[avva.livejournal.com]

Well, I'm pretty sure I haven't seen it anywhere before ;) but yeah, the punchline is probably too obvious not to have been used before, in one variation or another.